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52 Movie Reviews

One tiny flaw.

At Punish, I did not understand why you used letters from hebrew?
Further more, that demon-looking character titled "Molah", also any demonic entity is not scribed in the jewish bible, or at any part of the colture. That part had me baffled.

This could've been a more artistic film, if you used more ... 'Poetry rather than use urban words such as "Fuck".
Also, some of the presented art made the film look trippy and artistic, while at some points it made it look akward and childish.

W-P-S responds:

Moloch is not a demon, it's a Cananite god to whom people sacrificed children.
The old testament keeps on repeating how you shouldn't do shit for Moloch.

Also, "fuck" is a very poetic word.
Very expressive, when used correctly.

Lookie.

Congrats man, You've made a fine parody production, well served on the front page. =]

Recent Game Reviews

8 Game Reviews

Excellent game for school.

Got a free slot at your daily agenda while away from your stationary computer system?
This is one of the games to play.
Managed to scoop a total high score of 101,920,680, and every single medal, I believe my highest multiplayer score was around 160~200.

A very well done job, both of you and the composer.

Blah.

The game is okay, refresing and so on.

But not duarible, it repeats it self pretty fast.
Shame.

Recent Audio Reviews

6 Audio Reviews

That's a tad too loud to be called "Ambient", pip. This is all over the place, no focus to be heard even though the sound itself is pretty nice, but the tempo and composition is way off, imo.

I'd suggest you try to create tunes with slower tempo; it fails to represent anything due to the fact it seems it always try to run away to the next verse.
Try to create an adagio, melancholic melody; that should give you a really good practice to commit to a single subject / theme / atmosphere. The bonus is that it should expend your abilities as an author.

Funny thing you've done here.
Usually the beats are the background pattern; not the leading instrument instead of the melody.
Furthermore, if you label this as a loop; make sure it loops seamlessly. Because frankley every single tune/song which ends and repeats itself is a loop under that definition.

I can see this being a menu theme, it only needs to loop better.

justice511 responds:

thank you for your feed back :) but im probably not making any more loops bnecause i fonud a new program and it works grate for me go check it out :)

Not much of space.

This is not much of the regualr "space" tune, the traditional way to create such themes are by creating sound with high tempo with short bursts. (Which you did, but in a very calm fashion way.)

The tune is very good, but I would tag is as a "2D-Prison-cell" kind of-tune, Think of machinarium, I think you'll hear the connection.
(8/10 because, really, there is no climate to the tune. Even silent-ambients should get those.)

Good luck on your future endeavors.

Recent Art Reviews

6 Art Reviews

This painting reminds me of a few scenes from Fate/ Stay Night, and that says alot regarding the atmosphere it conveys, kudos!

This really reminds me a passage of Le Nausea..
"I'm in a the park. I drop onto a bench between great black tree-trunks, between the black, knotty hands reaching towards the sky. A tree scrapes at the earth under my feet with a black nail. I would like to let myself go[...] but I can't, existence penetrates me everywhere."

As much as we lay outward, we lay inward just as much; an existential calamity..Not quite what you were trying to say I presume; but I still correlate it to my image, even though yours is alot more about birth rather death.

The farthest arm seems to fail the figure's perspective, I can't even figure out where it is or what is it. Is it his right arm or left? Is it behind him or before him?
That thrown me completely off from this piece, even though it's done really well - that detail really ruined it for me.

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